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A long life
Full of frights
Was bestowed unto her

When a trouble
Came out of the rubble
She would stand to fight

Once it was over and done
She would go and sit under the sun

A warm summers breeze
And some pistachio nut ice cream

She may have been poor
But she loved her family all the more

She loved me and I here
Even when she spoke her word

I cannot see
Life without you and me

But I know

She loved us all until she passed
But as was told to me NOTHING GOLD CAN LAST

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This is for my grandmother RIP

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Very beautiful, heartfelt and touching. I love the rhyme and just the way you wrote it, with such honesty :love:
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~CuddleSlut17 Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very heartfelt and the last stanza is absolutely beautiful. Nice work.
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:icondeb-e-ann:
Beautiful capture and words. Your grandmother would be proud you have done this for her :hug:
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~zenzero541 Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you
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~DrowningSignificance Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Really beautiful poem and photograph.
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~meus-dilingo Jul 9, 2012  Student General Artist
beautiful poem!
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~zenzero541 Jul 9, 2012  Student Writer
thank you so much
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Mood: Love *GUDRUN355 Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful words...
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~zenzero541 Jul 9, 2012  Student Writer
well thank you
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