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The Night
In the night
The boys want to fight
Guns cocked
Eyes locked
On the on coming enemy

It is about to begin
The beginning of the end
Blood will be spilled
Brothers will be killed
Lives will stop
At one single shot

Young men become murderers in this forsaken night
All because the boys wanted to fight
Look to your left then to your right
What do you see
Just dead bodies with the souls set free

It was worth it i will guess
Well until you become the pest
Then your good as dead
Not even safe in your own bed
Because of this forsaken night
And because the boys went to fight
Love Can Not Last
Love can not last
The feeling leaves fast

You will find
That it is a waist of your time

If you try
You will fry
Into the greases of depression

Hate and misery will rise
Now that you have opened your eyes
Now you can see through her lies

It is time
You will find

That you need to grow up
And see that she is one big slut

Come on and see
And look through your misery.

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This was an old poem that i changed to a gif so hope you like please fav!!
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~Ididloveyou Aug 25, 2012
This is so cool!
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Mood: Sadness ~crysanthemum963 Jul 1, 2012
I agree that this goes a bit to fast, but the message is clear.
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Mood: Sadness ~archaicglint Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Can't read it
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Mood: Love *Deena6969 Jun 28, 2012
Yes It is fast!!!But really great!!The Black/Red Power colors and I like the photos!!Emotional!
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Mood: Hopeless ~KickassKeara Jun 28, 2012  Student General Artist
It goes by to fast, now I have to wait until it starts all over again.
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*enigmaticsmile Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It moves a bit fast, and frankly it would be hard to critique since I can't look at the piece as a whole poem...
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~Invictus47 Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really cool. I like the poem and how you made it but I think you should slow it down a bit so it is easier to read. But other than that, it awesome!
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~zenzero541 Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
i tried but that is the slowest i could get it :/ i guess i could try again :)
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~Invictus47 Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. It's fine. I had to watch it a few times but I did finally see the whole thing. Don't sweat it. :)
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~Poet-no-06 Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
This is an amazing idea :) It's cool to see other poets creating other types of poetry :)
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